by Iread2relax
An excellent chapter, the story is moving along nicely and the suspense is powerful. Well done.
Outstanding chapter!
I was surprised that Lionel thinks he is protecting his child by killing himself. I understand him but he has the choice to stop his madness. His daughter doesn't need him as a father if he continues on this path of destruction. Hopefully being a child of Lionel won't hurt her in the future.
I wonder why Sunnet acts like she hate Jacob. Clearly she is in love with him. She can't be mad at Jacob for being with Tasha since she pushes him away and moved away.
Damn!!! you just had to end it there???!!!! LOL... Great chapter... Looking forward to the next one. :)
Another fantastic chapter. I guess there's going to be a lot of action in chapter 8. Can't wait. :) Hope Lionel finally gets finished off.
Keamon said someone will be sacrificed. Please don't killer offJamal or Kerry. Let only Lionel die. Waiting for chapter 8. Post faster.
Marley
I have enjoyed reading all of your stories so far. I can't wait for the next chapter๐. I can see a spin off coming for some of your other characters. I look forward to what will come. Keep up the great work and keep writing. Maybe this will inspire me to write one of my own ๐๐
I know this is bad, but I never rate or comment until the story is complete. I find it hard to rate each chapter. I always see it as a whole story. I am working on this. But this chapter had me falling in love. Findings respect for the characters and despising that crazy evil shit more and more. This chapter had me on the edge of my seat more than the others. Lionel is an evil man and you capture that perfectly in his character. He's scary as fuck. Now off to read the next chapter.
Tasha is not foolish for the things she said just brutally honest, me being African American, the black community has a lot of struggles. With colonization and slavery black people have lots of self hatred directed at themselves especially people with dark skin. I'm not going to explain a whole bunch but even with this story that you made all I've been seeing is a bunch of interracial propaganda. No black love stories on here. It would be nice to see a dark Were be with another black or dark were for once. It's always the same white man white women, black man white women or white man black women. But other than that I love the story.