All Comments on 'West Tower Room 3503 Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Didn’t like the ending

Thought this could have been something deeper than a run of the mill drug and bimbo-tize a woman story. But at least you ended it here.

Very good writing, just thin on content for an overused story theme.

ConcitatusConcitatusabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Appreciate the feedback and sorry to fall short of expectations. There's another whole set (South Tower instead of West Tower) that were significantly longer and more involved. I'm going through those now to clean up old, bad writing then reposting them. Might be more to your liking as these were always shorter.

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