All Comments on 'Wet Dream for Two'

Intriguing idea

Love the concept, that half-aware state between consciousness and sleep, and what can transpire. You'd have a superb story with some shortening and making it a bit more believable. Little over-the-top it is. You might want to check out some others too, (an unusual fetish) with searching tags 'wet dream' or the like.

Great story, thanks.

Excellent. Lovely descriptions. The approach of going between Roger and Miranda worked really well. I was pleased with the ending as you resisted the temptation (which many authors would not) to have Roger wake and see and interact with Miranda. The dream worked well too. The CFNM element effective particularly Roger wandering around with his cock so hard. I had thought the daughter was Miranda but going back I see they were quite different. A rounded and well thought out story.

I loved his horny dream.

A double dream. His and hers.