All Comments on 'What a Fucking Massage Ch. 01'

Good story,

Loved the slow buildup and great finish but there is room for so much more. You do title this story "Chapter One" What can we look forward to in Chapters Two and beyond? Perhaps his breaking out from the physio office to a solo practice?

As a "physio" myself, I found his reflection when, in his office, Charlie suggests he see her that evening at her apartment a bit odd on two counts. First, this arrangement was already implied in his earlier conversation with Jill. And secondly, I would be much more concerned with the sounds made by amorous clients in the clinic being heard by other staff. My MO, when I worked in a shared office, was to tantalize but stop short of orgasm, suggesting that further exploration be resumed outside of the office.