by DeWMuff
Man--get an editor. The errors in word usage made whole sections seem like gobbledy-gook. The story may have been good, but I really could not tell.
JimDinMN
Do part 3! Great story!
What a trip Ch 1 and Ch 2 ------ Long maze, no cheese.
Great story so far... Please don't leave us hangin.
This was building nicely. Pity you never finished it. Ken