All Comments on 'What a Wild Day Ch. 01'

After reading the first several paragraphs the reader knows that this is going to be an excellent story. By the time the reader gets to the end of chapter one it has been confirmed that this will be one of the best Literotica stories ever.

You've got the psychology of it down, that's what makes it so hot. Honestly, I think this is every man's fantasy about 'sleepover tickle-fights' personified.

Very fine writing, sensual, sexy and plausible.

I love the way this story started out with one of the sexiest scenarios out there, then took it to a whole new level by bringing in a favourite fetish of mine.

Bravo, and I can't wait to read more!