All Comments on 'What Had I Done Ch. 01'

This should be in Exhibitionism.

Hope you add more parts .It is fun to see a normal guy let loose

Amazed by some of these comments. Surely we don't need punctuation nazis patrolling this site and those who are confused by two separate husbands sharing an initial should perhaps work through their confusion before commenting. I enjoyed this story almost as much as Allan....

I love CFNM stories and loved this one but I would have liked more datails across the sex scenes: how his swimsuit or underwear wss taken off, how he was groped by those hungry women, what each of them did, the very moment of cumming, etc. But, that said, the story is hot, sexy and gets me hopfuly interested.

I am a huge fan of CFNM so, I really enjoyed this story. It was fun and very much along the lines of my fantasies. Nice job!

If all someone can do is comment on grammar then your storyline and character development are perfect!

I can't believe that I am just now finding your stories. I love CFNM and have spent many hours/days on Lit reading everything I can find along this genre.

This story is a long time fantasy of mine.

I love your style!

Nicely done! Who wouldn't want to have so many ladies play with his junk! As long as the wife is there and having fun too what's the harm. Maybe a little more describing the sex scenes would have made it better but all-in-all a good effort!