All Comments on 'What Happens at the Lake...'

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhabited love.

I definitely need atleast two more chapters of these two 😊

am hoping for a chapter 2

Great start for a multi chapter story. Please?

Is this going somewhere? Written well but not enough material for a 4 or 5 star review. I give you a 3.

More please

5 Stars...More Please!!

Interesting start!

5 Stars

Well done. I hope you plan more chapters.

I do not like incomplete stories - if i was rating it i would give it a 1, but to penalize you for my dislike would be unfair - please continue the story.

short enough and to the point to be true

Super :)

Hmm. I agree with the other comments of, "needs work".

If you continue this story, or write another one, let there be a build-up, some tension between the characters. Don't rush to the ending. I've noticed a lot of Literotica readers say the same thing, so give the audience what they want.

Can’t wait for more of this one. Keep it coming!

I rated you a 5 for several reasons. (1) This part sounds non-fake and quite believable for a camping trip "I took in her trimmed dark hair above a beautiful pussy." (2) Based on your existing work, there is a big lot room to build a real multichapter incest real story. For example, in another year, after he and his sister get more comfortable, there will probably be the brother's sexy very full and shall we say super bush girlfriend, who has never tried it with a woman yet and come to think of it, neither has his sister. Then there is likely the girlfriend's tan and muscular very sexy brother. I bet it won't take long for both girls to seduce him on a camping trip while brother #1 pretends to take a walk but actually voyeurs it and records every savory minute of another brother and sister doing oral on each other and him eating two hairy sopping wet pussies. Possibly the girlfriend has a horny mom about 41-48. (3) Sorry, but I am now wanting to read more of your material since in this story, you used pubic hair on the lady, and you didn't try one of those silly to be laughed at shaved pussies with their disgusting pimples and orange-tinged razor burn skin all over it thinking someone would seriously find that nasty mess of puss oozing follicles attractive. Good job - on a realistic sounding story that has a potential future.

Enjoyed the read, hope there is more to follow

Good start, more please. Sexy sibling time.

Except for anointing sister's face with your cum I enjoyed the mutual masterbation story.

Should have helped each other out but maybe that happens later.

4 stars

Oh Yes !! Very hot 🔥 but I would really appreciate a second chapter 😘 😝

Nudity should be the norm at camping sites.