All Comments on 'What Happens in the Sauna'

by Nilsr

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sexymeupsexymeup9 months ago

was good story until you started that spanking shit, what is it with you assholes who like to hit women? while having sex, you think that is fun, well i punch you in your balls and see how well you like that.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Sorry, but they can't exactly switch the men's and women's locker rooms if they're closing the women's locker room for repairs. I guess you might have meant that they switched it so that they could have male workers in there without closing it, but that would ignore the possibility of female workers, which would be rather sexist and probably end up getting them sued. Further, they wouldn't pull such a switch for the very reason that you used as a basis for the story. Too much risk of a regular going into the wrong locker room and causing a disturbance, whether by accident or taking advantage of the situation to check out some naked women.

Once again, sorry, but without a believable premise, it just fell apart.

NilsrNilsr9 months agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment on switching the locker rooms. What you mention may be true in the US. However, the chain of gyms I’m going to in Stockholm, Sweden, they do switch the locker rooms when doing repairs. Probably because the majority of workers (plumbers and so on) are male but also it is deemed not so serious if there are female employees in men’s locker room, while the opposite is regarded as more intrusive.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Excellent story line. Nilsr please find a native English speaking editor. Direct translation from Swedish is difficult and creates a choppy and disjointed flow. Keep writing...

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Elderly gentleman been writing all my life, but reports/investigations and different academic works. Now I have transgressed into erotic short stories. Much more fun. When writing a story I want it to have a twist, something unexpected, somewhere. Sometimes that is not possibl...