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Anonymousover 4 years agoGrammar is important
So many errors in the grammar. It’s not a silly waste of time, it’s the polish on the apple and what separates a hack from a writer.
willyk1212about 2 months agosorry could have been lots better could have gotten to no malissa better
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Originsunknown@OriginsunknownBeen writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...
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