All Comments on 'What I won in Las Vegas Pt. 01'

Phew, hotter than a hot thing!

This story is not over!

That was very nice. Nice and Hot. Not my normal read but I must say I loved it.

We, the community of people interested in erotic literature, need the rest of this story. And we need it now. I give this highest marks on all counts: Story telling, eroticism, inventiveness & polish. However, I think readers deserved a seat at the greenway, so I feel just a tad bit cheated.

DOUGout

Waiting on part 2 HOT STORY

A very well-written story! Thoughtful, well-constructed. No noticeable grammar or spelling errors - quite rare. No thoughts of “this guy needs a proofreader”.

An interesting story concept. Curious if it’s all fiction or based in some reality. I’ll be checking your profile to see what you say about yourself.

If you get bored, take a look at my stories and let me know what you think. If this story and your others are any indication, we have similar desires!

Nicely developed and full of action, though I felt it ended a bit abruptly given how long he spent building the narrative. Great job!