All Comments on 'What It Takes Ch. 02'

I am a fan of most of your work and I am interested to see where this is going but I can't say I enjoyed this chapter. I don't mind non-human stuff that really explores unusual creatures and situations but this did nothing for me. But as a fan I will definitely read part 3 and 4.

You write very well, I like how you take time to build the scene with surrounings and you use all senses. Smell, touch and audio, nice descriptions.

I myself enjoy the alien-human interaction you describe, but it's a hard story to keep fresh and without clichées. A woman only have so many holes...

You do a good job of setting the scene and all that. I am curious on what this four legged creature is that's next.

Don't normally read nonhuman stuff, but I saw the author, & gave it a read. Its pretty good stuff. Horrifying, yet oddly titillating. I'll definitely be reading the remaining chapters to see how it ends!

Your stories seem so realistic. What a great imagination and writing ability you have.

You're writing improved from the first story. You focus more on the isolation and sense of failure. Are you going to delve more into feelings of humiliation?

If I had to offer a suggestion, I would suggest to not utilize right and left so much. Whether right or left doesn't really matter and it's a technical fact that just forces the reader to check their mental images to see if they conform to the text. It breaks the illusion of reality, at least for me.

Can't wait to read the third installment

You do it very very well, so well I'm thinking of checking out the rest of your work despite not really being into trans stuff

What an imagination you have. 5 stars! Thanks for your time and efforts.

I’m really enjoying this so far. Your story idea is unique, your character development is well done, and they way you describe the sights, sounds, and smells, it gives your story vibrancy and depth. Plus, I love the way you build on her revulsion gradually giving way to her lust.

This traumatized me a bit. Great story tho. Really well thought out and written.