All Comments on 'What Just Happened? Ch. 12'

Great story going on here. Always looking forward to what comes next.

Thank you!

A really great aspect of this story, I would love to see more like that

Can't wait for more chapters

All this debauchery, does Ed finally pay a price?

Structurally, it makes sense to end a story like this with an orgy. But I can't help feeling disappointed that not only did Ed not blow a load in his sister's pussy, he barely even fucked it.

good story.... was that the last chapter?

Thanks cindyp1976! I may come back to this story at some point, but I had to take a break from writing due to problems thrown up by the pandemic. Right now I'm focusing on my other series, "A Dusty Manuscript." I just uploaded chapter 3.