All Comments on 'What’s Your Verdict?'

For a newbie this was excellent. Well-described and well-written. Please keep them coming. an immediate 5*.

Well this has perked up my day. A very commendable first submission. Well done. A well deserved five stars.

Magical

Excellent first story, sooo hot 🔥

Wonderful work. A really intoxicating read. I enjoyed it thoroughly. I wish it was longer, but that is only a good thing. Means you need to make more.

A wonderful first submission which hopefully leads to more outlining the evolution of Catalina and Tara's business relationship. I cannot wait for more, hopefully Catalina introducing Tare to her strapon amongst other things. Catalina hinted at some good bondage and discipline by telling Tara that she would have a safe word.

Very good! “I want to be a novelist one day, and I love working with anything related to books”… like perhaps stories on Literotica? Hone your skills here all you want — we’re here to help and appreciate!