All Comments on 'What Sarah Said'

by Dar_Jisbo

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TGJamieTGJamieabout 9 years ago
Friends

I really like how they first became friends and did things together before becoming intimate, It makes the story believable. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well Written

Great story loved the build up and relationship they have. Love seeing Sarah stand up for her. Could you be more descriptive in things like clothes color etc. Like I was so curious was Sarah wearing pink or maybe something a bit more sexy? Other wise great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good

This was a good story. However it seemed a bit rushed. You could have written a chapter humiliating the jock and another working up the relationship between the two girls. Other than that, five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

To much use of brunette, leggy blonde, t-girl

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
hot and sweet

loved it ,so wish there was more to read. thank you

Buildings_Cool71Buildings_Cool71almost 7 years ago
Very well written

Very good, thank you

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