All Comments on 'What the Hell's Happening Ch. 08-09'

Keeps getting better... From a guy that obviously knows nothing about the industry we have the hare brained idea that when a show gets yanked that the way forward is very expensive, difficult to shoot plot based porn?

You have kids around in this mess?I actually thought this was going to be different.Cock cages? Really? Written from the cuckold humiliation playbook. Not an original thought in this.Don't quit your day job

Ok I know Cuck stories can be HOT, BUT this is beyond stupid....you have this going on right in the house with children, little girls if I remember correctly . DOES Becky have no love or concern for her children in any of this crap. Moving the boyfriend in the house...spending all day fucking...does she ever see her kids. By now the kids would have told someone at school and DSS would be crawling up their unemployed asses. please keep reality in mind with your writing...she doesn't love Kevin or her Children. please stop writing because your mind is too twisted, or fix this trash and have Kevin take the kids and grow a pair of balls

Why pretend to be American? You fail at the dialect so miserably it's funny. You're British - be British, for fuck's sake.

The story arc is ridiculous. Why would Kevin accept any of this? He seemed to be a relatively normal bloke, reacting jealously at the party, but within days he's a totally submissive lifestyle cuckold? Not bloody likely. Write real people with real reactions and your stories will be enjoyable.

"What the hell is this shit?"

Is it supposed to be satire? If so it's not funny enough.

Is it supposed to be serious? If so it's too clichéd and boring.

It certainly isn't erotic.

Why the moderators of this site would even post stuff like this. Simply awful is the only term that fits.

Each part going down into the dirt...Did they gave the children for adoption? Or the children are blind and deaf?

Fantastic!!!

I loved your story, gave it 5 stars.

I have no idea why some other people here read the entire story then complain about the subject matter.

Plz, Never mind these people's full of crap.

You did a fantastic job of writing.

Thanks for your incredible story.

Just keep on writing.

While you are a very good writer you lack creativity.

cre·a·tiv·i·ty: the use of the imagination or original ideas, especially in the production of an artistic work.

This story reads like you have a list of cuckold cliches and are trying to use them all in one story. Here are a few we can expect in up coming chapters.

Kev get to suck dick

Kev gets ass fucked

Kev gets to raise another man's kid

These are the only ones left I can think of. Anyone else want to add to the list?

I agree with 'anonymous' that it would be hard to keep this from the kids, but I am enjoying the story itself.

Don't be too quick to apologise for errors - that tends to put me off, and in your story they are very few, and in every case I knew what you meant.

the negative comments. Those not into the fetishist don't, apparently can't, understand that there really are those that are. While there are some aspects of your story that require "suspension of disbelief" it is for the most pretty well written. Given the genre (cuckold, for sake of titillation) I'm willing to forgive alot! Maybe I shouldn't be!

An unexpected New direction.

Think I will hang around a bit longer to see how Jeb can get on over Matt.

Well this is another cuckold story on a site alreadt awash with cuckold stories !

The author clearly has a very good talent for writing and though there is a need to inject a little depth and imagination into the story. I still feel that this is a cliche cuckold story and has all the elements of a typical cuckold husband,

As some anonymous comments have already mentioned the husband to tick off the remaining cuckold duties of;

Suck lovets cock

Get buggered by lover

Cream oie cleaning of wife snd lover

Raise the wife's and lovers child

And there is the typical cuckold story.

Whst i was hoping for is when the worm turns, the husband revolts.

As this is a much harder subject to write about.

However a much more interesting read though !

So just for a change can we have a story which is different from typical, stereotypes of cuckold stories on this site.

Can't wait to see what happens next. More!

I thought this was a 14 part series?

anon.1

Will we get any more?

If you're going to keep writing this shit, STICK TO ONE FUCKING CATEGORY!

Love the sex too

Agree with another comment that the husband should kick this guy in the nuts and throw the slut out. They can make enough money in the porn industry and pay him alimony and child support.

Agree also that the quality level of this site is going down, notwithstanding a few exceptions.

Cant take any more of the cuck rubbish