All Comments on 'What You Will'

by AcheronStyxx

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I was a bit confused

I had no idea what was wrong with the main character then I see the autism tag for this story and i just about slapped myself up the head it was so obvious. Interesting story though!

AcheronStyxxAcheronStyxxabout 8 years agoAuthor
Sorry for the confusion

I apologize for the confusion. I was just trying to fill in the background a little. The character is, of course, myself with a changed name. I just didn't want to make the story about that characteristic and so didn't want to focus on it. Thank you for the feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Great Story! Hopefully, there will be a continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

more chapters this is a great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
amazing

This is hands down one of the best stories I've ever read. It's like you know about my life and wrote a story to go along to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Mixed

Loved the action between Laura & David. Didn’t really enjoy the Circe/David thing. At least they were all about consensual relationships.

tausttaustalmost 4 years ago

I liked the writing of this story but I'll have to admit I found the play scenes a little more effort to work through.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I I wish the production of Twelfth Night that I was in were as much fun.

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