All Comments on 'What's a Nice Girl Like You....?'

I wasted my time reading this ' " story ' "

This creative flight of fantasy left me confused. Was the enchantress a succubus-like creature or a sex addict willing to sacrifice annoying suitors for her pleasure? Her age-shifting was too mysterious. I suspect it was an effort to account for the tragic historical narrative.

Content aside, the writing style is good. Character depiction is clear and concise and the protagonist’s inner dialogue added depth. Scene description was fairly vivid and added color.

I could have done without the incestuous daddio.

Keep writing and you most likely will knock a few out of the park.