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All Comments on 'Wheels-Down in Cuba'

by cubalover

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 10 years ago
Lovely writing.

Thank you.

ricksouzaricksouzaover 10 years ago
Smooth!

I appreciated your use of the English language! The turn of a phrase ("a little piece of my heart tears away and floats after him.") and your vocabulary -- I have never read the word "gibbous" in any story on this website. Way to go!

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