All Comments on 'When He Isn't Looking Ch. 02'

by littleladyfun

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
pooky12349pooky12349almost 7 years ago
When he isn't looking

I don't know what the title of the story means, but it sure is hot. I loved every bit of it and will now wait for more. You're a good storyteller and a good writer so that makes it all that much easier to read and enjoy. You've got more stories I want to read but I think I've had enough excitement for one night!

Ted

BertieBlackBertieBlackalmost 7 years ago
Huh??????????

There was no lead-up to the sex act. What did this woman find so irresistible about this guy other than his muscular arms, shoulders and dick? He was a close friend of her boyfriend, what made the story at all realistic? Tequila makes her clothes fall off??????

Huh??????????????

She must be the original freak.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous