All Comments on 'When I Found You Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great start, I know you said once a week, however we wouldn't be upset if you add new chapters earlier, or if they were a little longer, I just start reading, catch up and really get into it, and it's over.

Great job, thanks

ScottPrestonScottPrestonover 1 year agoAuthor

Chapter 4 is almost complete. Thanks for the feedback. Chapters will release as soon as I complete them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I have just wasted 10 fucking minutes

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11over 1 year ago

Well paced story, Characters are generally believable and dialogue is just right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. One minor detail - Berkeley and Los Angeles are not that close to one another.

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Hey all! I am new to writing (started in 2022) and after spending the past few years reading stories on this site I wanted to start posting some. I hope you enjoy! I work to post new chapters or stories at least once a week.

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