by ScottPreston
Great start, I know you said once a week, however we wouldn't be upset if you add new chapters earlier, or if they were a little longer, I just start reading, catch up and really get into it, and it's over.
Great job, thanks
Chapter 4 is almost complete. Thanks for the feedback. Chapters will release as soon as I complete them.
Well paced story, Characters are generally believable and dialogue is just right.
Good story. One minor detail - Berkeley and Los Angeles are not that close to one another.