All Comments on 'When I Found You Ch. 15'

Dude, you are dying on the vine........ 15 chapters and very little erotica. Even the non-erotic which is about 90%+ is really dragging......... Don't mean to be a downer, but you will lose what were interested readers and if you don't step your game. Not a threat merely becomes a reality.

Pulling for you........

Thanks for the feedback. This is designed to be a slow story that builds closer to the end. I had plans for about 100 chapters but given the recent feedback only planning 27 now. My next series will be much more active.

Love the story. Cant wait for more

Hey all!

I wanted to let you all know that "When I Found You" will end with 18 chapters. I am ending this story early as it has not gone the way I originally planned, and I would prefer to start fresh with a new project. It has been great practice for my first public writing story.

For my next one, I will take more time planning the plot and expanding the chapters to be faster-paced.

The following chapters will be released all at once at some point in the next two weeks.

Chapter 16 - Prom Night

Chapter 17 - The Day After

Chapter 18 - College & Beyond (epilogue)

I will then take some time to formulate my next story. That story will be posted in groups of three chapters.

- Scott

I have completed two chapters, and will be working on the third now. Releasing hopefully by Monday.

Thank you, looking forward to reading these. Best wishes on the following story you are planning on as well. (same person that posted below)

Is there going to be additional parts? I see that CH. 15 was posted almost 2 months ago. I really enjoyed the first 15 CH.!!!

Hey everyone. Still recovering from a bad sickness. I have completed everything but the final half of the third chapter. I will get this out soon. Sorry for the wait. - Scott

Hey, Scott - You have an interesting story going here, I'm glad you pulled back from your original intention of writing 100 Chapters - a VERY ambitious plan for a first effort. I'm somewhat concerned that your current plan of cutting 27 planned chapters by a third may leave much of your original intent unexplored. Looking forward to the next three chapters, even though they are taking (much) longer than you promised. It has been fun watching your writing style grow and develop. I hope to see the next fruits of your efforts soon. (SOON!)

Needs to finish

Any update on finishing this or submitting the balance of the chapters ?

Going on 5 months? Hope your health issues are behind you.......