All Comments on 'When Is It Ok To Cheat'

You should have left it at just the one story.

Probably best if there isn't a third

Okay!

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Uhm…. Okay

Great story phill, it’s not the truth. And Paula is a friend and will always be a friend. Im sorry yes there’s a mutual attraction and has been for alot of years, but it will always remain as friends babe. I understand if that isn’t easy to believe, you would also probably become good friends with her, I think the 2 of you would get along very well, that part of the reason why her and I are good fried and why there’s always been a feeling there. We’ve never crossed the line and we discussed it and there will never be one. And I welcome you to meet her someday. The drug deal I get and know I can’t say shit but that’s not right fair ir the reality of it, and also you’re welcome in my life to watch me prove that to you. I love you. If you do not want me then tell me if you do then stop. And lets write s different story

An interesting approach - neither BTB nor RAAC - so some LW people won't be happy but I like it. I also like the way your style is thoughtful, as if it's being debated in your own head (maybe it is?). Thank you for posting it.

Well selfish people do vile and disgusting things

There's only one word to describe this. STUPID!!

no plot.... just disjointed telling of infidelity.2 stars

I really enjoyed your first story, but this just didn’t appeal to me at all.

She "lost her uterus"? Did she check under the sofa cushions or in the Lost & Found at her work? That phrase told me where this was headed. No dialogue? This reads like an idea sketch or a transcript. It's kind of a story, but it's lifeless as offered. Write us a story. Create scenes from those paragraphs where you tell us what happened. I didn't rate it.

"An interesting approach - neither BTB nor RAAC so some LW people won't be happy..."

Yes, I see that. Like I give a fuck... You write your story and if it's not exactly what people expect or want, well, it's not an episode of Dick Van Dyke...

The story reads as if it is a sad memoir. The police treat crackheads like criminals because they are criminals.

I don't usualy respond unless I have something constructive to add but and this is a big but, this story emcapsulates everything that is plain bad and then some

Never a reason to cheat. Divorce first, fuck second. Horrible story

Well there's twenty minutes of my life wasted. Was this written by a eight grader? 0 Stars for this crap. - BJ