All Comments on 'When it Came Through the Door Pt. 15 - Final'

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Darkness_Overlord97Darkness_Overlord97about 1 year ago

Quite a coincidence that both Helena AND Maria left their husbands around the same time. @FoxEmerson, think you can tell us why they both left? And is it possible that we can know if Helena would return in a future series if you make one?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This ending was very abrupt. After 15 chapters of them messing around - and being very promiscuous (especially Jackson, even mentioned that he was still having sex with others in Ch 14), this ends just as they declare their feelings for each other? And Jackson says he’s been waiting for a long time? What - this needs some explanation. It seems kind of out of left field and then boom - the end. Disappointing after following this story all these chapters.

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