All Comments on 'When Layla Forgot to Take Her Pill'

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DanteHasBeenBadDanteHasBeenBad12 months ago

Not entirely sure why squirting is being called excrement here because excrement is a polite word for feces. I didn't see anything pertaining to scat in this story.

ClavinMobClavinMob12 months ago

Ditto what @DanteHasBeenBad said. Also, not entirely sure why this is in the "Mind Control" section. Feels better suited to "NonHuman"

Sparrow9642Sparrow964212 months agoAuthor

@ClavinMob honest to god mistake. I'll be sure to correct that mistake in future works. I'd never received any complaint about it before, so I had no clue. As for the genre choice, it falls under mind control, because the story is about a girl's mind being taken over by an alter ego of herself. I wasn't really sure where to put this, so I went with the best option imo.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Hot, but not Mind Control

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