All Comments on 'When the Need Strikes'

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mrem4nmrem4n13 days ago

Super hot concept and I enjoyed reading it. I could never get behind the fact that they insisted on lying to mason, tho. They KNEW going into this deal that theyd be doing something extreme for 4mil so why the prudishness? Where did the resentment toward mason come from that kept them from admitting the truth? He's a guy a kink that they agreed to participate in for 4 mil. Seems pretty straightforward.

JBEdwardsJBEdwards12 days ago

It's amazing what money can buy, even magical cupcakes, not to mention Bethany. (I do believe she's a natural but only in the sense that perhaps she didn't need the cupcakes. However, I don't believe she was a volunteer; even Lord Degraves can lie.) This was a fun story. Five stars, JB

Robinius1Robinius112 days ago
Well...

I didn't really understand this one and it was fairly long. The ending was weird. Paying the old fart made their guilt go away? Not 2 million each, though, they kept a million each - but why was the old guy so generous and how did he relieve their guilt?

Interesting? Maybe, but I just don't get it.

WineandcheeseWineandcheese6 days ago

Great story, as long as you don’t get bogged down trying to figure things out. Just go with it. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

I actually wanted them to get nothing for not only being so damn rude to Mason, but for also lying to him repeatedly. Seriously there was no consequences for their continuous lying. They shouldn’t have received a single cent

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