All Comments on 'When the Seelie Fae Come Knockin''

Exceptionally well done. Perfect even. Keep 'em coming.

Well told!

I loved the story but would have enjoyed it even more if at the end, Terri admitted that she had no idea who Jenna was, had never met her before

No clue what this was? Should it not be in sci Fi or non human?

OK, that's hot.

That was really hot !

Awesome!!! Perfectly executed. Ignore the octogenarian comments posted by the illiterates. Looking forward to more from you.

A very hot story. Thank you.

Wish my wife would do that

LOVED air! Please keep writing and sharing.

Thank you for posting your hard work!

It is abundantly clear at the end that Jenna is NOT a fairie! Although Halloween is a fair season to mix a bit of Fantasy or Non-Human into Lit’s LW (and others) category. Like RobertL commented above, it would have been neat for Jenna to really own her wings and fly away into the early morning … full of ‘sausage’ and ‘cream’!

5*

Anonymous 26thNC pussy, keep your own dim-witted responses to yourself unless you have something constructive to offer

Interesting comments about the husband being a "cuck." A wife brings home a hot twenty-something chick for her husband to get blown by, fuck and sodomize, and that makes him a cuckold? Y'all keep using that word... I do not think it means what you think it means.

And a very happy all Hallows eve was had by the trio.

Great Halloween story, Five Stars.

Loved the story and would love to see where it goes and if they have more play time. He is one lucky guy.

That. Was. Fucking. Hot.

Also well written and charming and has good pacing. I honestly wasn't sure if you were pushing in a bit of magic Halloween or if the wings were costume until page two. It was a good reveal and a fun conceit.

Did I mention it was hot as fuck? I did? Good. I hope you enjoyed writing it, and thanks for sharing!

@Orcaorcinus

Thank you! I wanted to explore a couple with a sexy wife who's big into roleplay and theatrics to spice things up when the kid's away. I just might be working on their next little game :)

This one is by far one of the hottest stories ive ever read here

I cant wait to show it to my wife