by fairy14
short but sweet,for me its like every time u come to the good part u just stop,so can u plsssssss lengthen your chapters
ps- every one love a cliff hanger, it what keeps readers coming back but no one love a hanger --length !!!
I think this is shaping up to be really interesting. You definitely have me hooked. You've obviously got talent, I hope you keep writing as I would really like to see where you take this. Thank you for all so far.
Please carry on with this story, you certainly have my attention now.
in no order, what is she, who is she running from, and why do i think she has just run smack into the
alpha, and he has ides?
excellent chapter i can not wait to see what her other half is and how the residents are going to react to it
I can't wait for the next chapter, so please post as soon as you can. Thank you! :-)
wow, you have me hooked.This is totally awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter.
ok, i really really wanna know what happens next. very nice cliff hanger, by the way.
I really like this story. Can't wait until you post more.
What happened to your Running Scared story?
nice start hope you continue but . . . .WHAT THE HELL happened to Running scared please respost that story
Off to a really nice start w/these first two chapters. I have one more to read and then I'll be all caught up!
I like the start. I enjoy these types of stories. The only thing is that I feel like she's not speaking like a normal person. I feel like she's either being melodramatic or something. It just feels awkward. I know she's supposed to have an edge b/c of whatever threat she is facing but she has such a nasty attitude which doesn't go with her looking down as to not challenge the weres, etc. It doesn't follow for me. She should either go with saying fuck it and not worrying about insighting them or get her attitude under control. Just some feedback I'd give if I were editing for you. I think you have a good beginning to the story and I'll keep reading.
I'm liking this story; I really am, but what happened to Running Scared if I may ask? That story was amazing and I was anticipating the next chapter.
I moved to another site and I have a site specific email account and I just haven't bothered with it. I just really hated the extremely long periods of time it took to upload a single chapter and then if I spotted an error I would have to go and resubmit o.O it just seemed tedious and unnecessary. I'm actually working on Chapter 12 of this story so I'm thinking about maybe posting story here as well since if feel bad for jumping ship without a word.
Stories* i* that's another thing...you can't edit/delete your own comments... Le sigh
You are not the first writer to "jump ship," however most don't even tell us where they have gone, they just leave us hanging and waiting, which is uncool.
I would love to finish reading this story, please?