by bigbear137
I enjoyed that twist at the end very much. I do hope you write another chapter about how things progress with Kay.
Loved the story. Especially how the secret was kept, but now it is no more. The scenarios of bringing the lifestyle into the office is mouth watering.
Nice concept, good execution. Looking forward to reading the rest of your work!
Nice premise.
Could have used some descriptionof the chastity device being removed. First some discussion about wjether he wanted it removed. And if he'd like it if he was teased and edged. Perhaps some discussion about whether sh wantwd to do that or not, keeping him on tenterhooks for a while. Then the removal. And some minor handling/playing to get him good and hard.
Some details about the edging were sorely needed.
Nevertheless, five stars.