All Comments on 'Where Is My Mind? Ch. 01'

I look forward to the next installment Alana. This one could have been a little longer, but was definitely a great start. Keep them coming.

Strange little story, well not a story really, just a little start, not erotic, just a little domince thing. I think this is in wrong catagory. You could do 10 parts, put it all together and have one story. I personly don't care.

in the wrong category. It belongs in the trash bin

the writing was good, i would like to hear how the rest of her day goes. maybe she screws another man,? anyway, please hurry with part 2, i haven't read any of your stories, but i'm going to read them all after i leave this comment.Add to the fact that you are gorgeous, and i can't help but be interested. Keep up the good work Alana

This was, all in all, pretty stupid, but you got a few LW yapping dogs interested.