All Comments on 'Where Passion Flows'

Written well, dialgoue and visual descriptions are good. But, the weird misandry was awkward and a turn off. "We men sure are a strange lot" or "Never say 'Is there anything I can do for you' to a naked man, it leads to trouble." and yet, as a man, I cannot relate, so statements like those should have been character specific and not broad generalisations. Also, infidelity should have been included in the tags. Many people are very sensitive to it and it can easily ruin an okay story.