by Surfbum77
Brilliant stuff anf great fun! The imagery is first class. A special mention to the speed-skater hurtling round the ice rink, but the Oscar goes to Briony's pussy: "like a perfect meringue - firm on the outside, chewy on the inside."
This is a splendid romp! I wonder how it will develop. Can't wait to find out.
I like the smooth, unfussy writing style. The scenarios are good too. A little cliched perhaps, but that's more of a virtue than a fault in stories of this kind. 5 stars