All Comments on 'While He Watches'

Sometimes Doms, Masters, lovers, husbands, sweethearts, etc. forget what they are missing until it reaches out and smacks them in the face like a wet washcloth. They honestly work their minds to different directions and don't realize they are ignoring the one they love the most until they are on the edge of losing something they would die to keep. Don't let this happen to you or your relationship. No job, no golf game, no outside interference is worth the loss of your love.

Excellent! I love a story that is to the point and doesn’t take pages to get to it! I also love the realistic aspect of the story - I have found myself in similar situations before. I also like that the reader is aware that she is enjoying the whole experience.