All Comments on 'White Freshman, Black Coeds Ch. 26'

by MarkLivingston

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Falstaff60Falstaff60about 1 month ago

Great chapter. Appreciate the moral fortitude of Mark in that position. The bad part would be one of the adults catching Mark, Nia and Erika "playing". But I liked how you approached Nia's fathers' reaction. It was very believable and not over the top, though it could go that way if they are caught playing with the cousin. Looking intently for the next chapters to see how you play this out.

MarkLivingstonMarkLivingstonabout 1 month agoAuthor

@Falstaff: Thanks as always for your insightful feedback. I think you'll like the next installment.

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