by walterk
Okay story so far, don't turn it into another mythical huge black cock story. Keep it real and it will do well.
Great story but the pool part throws it of bc its unrealistic. How tf was she breathing? Lol & shit Beth shoulda gave dat coochie up on the day of the interview. Don't make a brotha wait dat damn long..
The part where she goes into the pool with ankle weights ruined it for me. That is so unrealistic as one poster commented, and quite foolish.