All Comments on 'Whitewash High Ch. 24'

Like Gale or Maya? Your portrayal of Maya was fantastic. As it is now widely known Indian women are colonised sluts who throw themselves at white men.

You might want to hang this one up. You had your foot on the gas with this story a long time ago up until chapter 18. Had a plot, character development, direction, and some creative sex scenes. Now it seems you're dragging this out for pay for chapter purposes. You're uninspired and it's noticeable. Rather than sacrifice the quality of all that earlier work, find a way to put this to bed. Doesn't seem like your focus, heart and creativity is dedicated to this one anymore.

@Anon: Yes, Maya and Gale will be making appearances in some form in the upcoming chapters. 4 more chapters are on the editing block (as of July 26th, 2020).