All Comments on 'Who am I Ch. 01'

Do everyone a favor ... don't write any more of this drivel. By the way, woman is singular, women is more than one.

Tags keep me from wanting to read your story, but I’ll give you *2 stars for the pen name.

Anyone gonna place money on this being a retread?

Written exactly like a couple other "writers", guess the previous new name didnt work out for ya like you thought.

At some point it'll get through the brain damage that a new name wont make your horrible writing skills any better.

good originality .. keep going ....

Nice start

good start .. keep going

Sorry, not my cup of tea. Too sour.

Thanks to all you guys who loved my first story.

Those who didn't like , I will just say that it is my first story . The next chapter will be more exiting and you will love it guys

Found this to he very exciting...the plot and concept is really engaging but try going a little slow, revealing her slutty side a bit slowly, instead of such a drastic reveal right away.

Anyways, I love it regardless. Please write more parts and keep the story going. Eagerly waiting.

Nice start.. Wanna read further story

Nice start.. Wanna read further story..

kingsters07

Loved the characters and the concept of gang bang

Great beginning.. Waiting for more.. A homely woman being slut at heart is a great way to describe yourself.

Nice story as we spoke the other day. Please continue with the good writing. Waiting for the next chapter eagerly. I hope you must have known me by now. Do connect