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Click hereI'll end with saying that you might think you really know your neighbors; think again. The truth is, no one knows what they might do if put in certain circumstances. I never would have believed that Amy and I were capable of killing anyone. I now know the truth about myself. If anyone messes with my family or friends, I will do whatever is necessary to keep them safe and I'm speaking as a sixty year old grandmother.
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Thank you for reading my story
Comments are always welcome and appreciated
DG Hear
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoAt the beginning of page three, you completely mixed up Susan and Amy, this seems to be a common thing in your stories, e.g. changing Susan to Sharon.
oldpantythiefover 1 year agoWhen I read that there wasn't any finger prints on the shovel or pitchfork, I figured someone was wearing gloves. Well, we know that the three cheerleaders were wearing gloves. Given it was part of their costumes no one would think anything of it. Just didn't think is was the two of them covering for each other. Hay, that's what good friends are for. Liked the story and all I've got to say is what goes around comes around and payback is a bitch lol.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoOutstanding story; a masterpiece. Excellent plot, suspense, weaving of the action and interaction of the characters.
I especially enjoyed the two part format: the Jake investigation and then a break before the actual solution was presented. That was pure genius.
Good riddance: three scum bags getting their payback, what they so rightly deserved. Can it be any more satisfying for these two women in the story, the victims, to get such good a revenge? Rapists deserve to die; if you just asked those two who died, I wonder if they would still find their actions as wonderful and justifiable as they thought it was at the time. Jake also got his fair and just punishment when he tried to molest Amy. Thank God for the combined action of the two best friends.
5* +++++
BJ
Anonymousover 7 years agoI think those three scum bags got what they deserved and good for the two women to get their revenge on them...anyone who rapes a woman deserves to die just like those two assholes did...and Jake got his cumuppence when he tried to molest Amy...good riddance to rotten rubbish....
calflashabout 9 years agoglad you continued the story as it would have left a lot unanswered. Pretty dark but a good read.
Tavadelphinalmost 10 years agoThe white gloves with the orange R on them we heard about numerous times - including when Susan related the actual assault - saying they had the gloves on - wasn't it lucky.
Harry in VA agree or disagree i usually read your comments and accept they are well intended but the idea that a story is unrealistic because the people in it lied to a cop?? Or because the cop believed his wife when he had no reason to actually suspect her? They had considered the possibility of connections but found none - simple enough.
I enjoyed it - realistic or not and found it plausible.
Anonymousover 10 years agoSusan's fingerprints on the shovel and Amy's on the pitchfork. No gloves and no way to clean a wooden handle. T
Bfreetorunover 11 years agoThanks again for putting the ending on it. I hate no-ending stories.
Anonymousover 16 years agoCould somebody point out just where the eroticism was in this tale of "erotic horror."
Honestly, did anyone who read it get hard or wet from this story? Did anyone actually masturbate? I see comments on other stories from readers getting off on the story, but I can't believe anyone thinks this is erotic literature.
Be honest, DG, did anyone send you a private email saying how horny the story made them? If not, I suggest the non-erotic category for this type of work.
Anonymousover 16 years agoAt one point Susan becomes Sharon, and at another, Amy becomes Susan. There were another couple of sloppy mistakes that any editor should have caught (or any writer who actually proofreads)--how embarassing, yes?
But all in all, it was a decent effort, even though the dialog was horribly stilted in many cases; sometimes, we readers get what we pay for.
MidnightPoetover 16 years agoI enjoyed reading this story. It was well written and thought out. I love a good mystery, and this one was excellent. The mess up with names in the second part was somewhat off putting, but over all a great read. The only thing that bothered me was the thought of a grandmother being a murderer, and looking at it so casually, but I know that's just the personality of the character, and she was well put together as a character.
Anonymousover 16 years agoIt was very good except for messing up the names in the epilogue.
PEATBOGover 16 years agoAlthough your ending was somewhat predictable, this was a great story! So thanks DG for another exceptionally well-written story - it's always a pleasure to read a new one from the master! Stories like this make up for the junk so often dished out as literature on this site. There are few really good writers on Literotica but you are certainly one of them! What is there to say? Another gem of a tale! Full marks DG - no suggestions for improvement - to me it was simply a perfect tale of justified revenge! A devoted fan, Pete.
