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Click hereI'll end with saying that you might think you really know your neighbors; think again. The truth is, no one knows what they might do if put in certain circumstances. I never would have believed that Amy and I were capable of killing anyone. I now know the truth about myself. If anyone messes with my family or friends, I will do whatever is necessary to keep them safe and I'm speaking as a sixty year old grandmother.
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DG Hear
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agoAt the beginning of page three, you completely mixed up Susan and Amy, this seems to be a common thing in your stories, e.g. changing Susan to Sharon.
oldpantythiefover 1 year agoWhen I read that there wasn't any finger prints on the shovel or pitchfork, I figured someone was wearing gloves. Well, we know that the three cheerleaders were wearing gloves. Given it was part of their costumes no one would think anything of it. Just didn't think is was the two of them covering for each other. Hay, that's what good friends are for. Liked the story and all I've got to say is what goes around comes around and payback is a bitch lol.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoOutstanding story; a masterpiece. Excellent plot, suspense, weaving of the action and interaction of the characters.
I especially enjoyed the two part format: the Jake investigation and then a break before the actual solution was presented. That was pure genius.
Good riddance: three scum bags getting their payback, what they so rightly deserved. Can it be any more satisfying for these two women in the story, the victims, to get such good a revenge? Rapists deserve to die; if you just asked those two who died, I wonder if they would still find their actions as wonderful and justifiable as they thought it was at the time. Jake also got his fair and just punishment when he tried to molest Amy. Thank God for the combined action of the two best friends.
5* +++++
BJ
Anonymousover 7 years agoI think those three scum bags got what they deserved and good for the two women to get their revenge on them...anyone who rapes a woman deserves to die just like those two assholes did...and Jake got his cumuppence when he tried to molest Amy...good riddance to rotten rubbish....
calflashabout 9 years agoglad you continued the story as it would have left a lot unanswered. Pretty dark but a good read.
Tavadelphinalmost 10 years agoThe white gloves with the orange R on them we heard about numerous times - including when Susan related the actual assault - saying they had the gloves on - wasn't it lucky.
Harry in VA agree or disagree i usually read your comments and accept they are well intended but the idea that a story is unrealistic because the people in it lied to a cop?? Or because the cop believed his wife when he had no reason to actually suspect her? They had considered the possibility of connections but found none - simple enough.
I enjoyed it - realistic or not and found it plausible.
Anonymousover 10 years agoSusan's fingerprints on the shovel and Amy's on the pitchfork. No gloves and no way to clean a wooden handle. T
Bfreetorunover 11 years agoThanks again for putting the ending on it. I hate no-ending stories.
