All Comments on 'Who Needs Bangers & Mash? Ch. 01'

I f this is your first submission, I will be waiting to read future posts as you become more polished. This is a very good work. What I like most about your story is that it's believable and delivered as in everyday conversation with friends. Your description of the event as it unfolded was a little onthe fast side, but well laid out. Keep up the good work.

A really enjoyable story about a VERY lucky stiff! So... does Dani get in on the action in Chapter 2?

Why didn't Dani take the middle position in the bed?