by Gator5280
Who wants to read about a slut/whore and her doormat, weak and pathetic, cuck boyfriend. Vomit material.
If he had any backbone or self respect he should be holding a pistol ready to present to Tommy when the arsehole attempts to blackmail the slut into more sexual performances. Just just present: to use on the fucker.
Ohh to bad your wife came and made you stop with what started as a very well written story. You did it so well I would be tempted to look at 07 but it is unlikely that I will get to see it by chance. Try some longer pieces please.
It would help if you published longer pieces. This story is hurting from the lack of so many things, and if someone does get interested, don't expect them to stick around for the next half-page dribble. Also, "interracial" has two Rs. Like it really matters.