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All Comments on 'Who Wishes Upon a Star Ch. 02'

by SingingItInDerkos

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SingingItInDerkosSingingItInDerkos10 months agoAuthor

At the last page there is an editing mistake on my part:

"I am," Tiffany whispered, hung her head, and fell asleep. The rest of Sally

This "The rest of Sally" means absolutely nothing and is a leftover from the first draft. I intend to fix it when the time comes.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This chapter was REALLY hard to follow

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