All Comments on 'Wife Catches Husband'

This has the framework for a good story. But it is so poorly written.

Would love more

I like the basis of the story, but you need to work on your literary skills, which are sadly lacking.

I agree withy the others but please don't stop. You will get better and better with each new chapter. I use a Word addon called ProWritingAid to help me with my grammar. Might be worth looking into.

Yes this was an awesome story. If I may suggest you should download a writing app called Grammarly I know a bunch of writers that use it. It comes as a free app for basic use. Will correct spelling, and how a sentence is structured. It will help you become a good storyteller. Grammarly can also be upgraded to a fully functional helper. Now about your story, I thought it was hot and could use a second chapter.

I’d give you an 8 star rating you did good with the plot it was the spelling that knocked 2 stars off the rating.

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Best of luck

Shortymcc aka Lynn

Get an editor, the screw ups detract from the story

Work on you writing, the plot, the beginning, middle & end, capitalization, etc. Read some stories that are 4+ stars. Maybe use and editor a few times. Read and reread your stories before posting.

yes more please love it

It was a pretty good debut story, some of the content were not quite to my appetite. I give it a 5 Star vote, could have easily had a page two as the story ended abruptly. Quite a fantasy you have.

Great text area.... Always great comments in here... Waiting for more...!!

I actually loved this first story, yes it has got some issues but being slagged my anon is not helpful, my total story count is zero so I won't tell you positive or negative just that I loved it and can't wait for more, keep going gurl,5*off me, it hits my buttons,maid, cuckold and BI can't wait

I generally hate forced cuckold stories but it seemed that John wanted this. MInimal abuse and humiliation are key here for a loving couple who are expanding their roles.

part 2 cuming i hope?

Cant stop thinking of sucking his cock with you

Good story. It does need some cleanup work, as you'd warned, but it's a good story start. Please do continue writing it ... and run the spellchecker on it if you get a chance.

I love it,. You had me wishing I was the one being cought and forced. Thank you, it is offton a writer can do that. Ty

Oh yes use me like that love from sissy lacie