by ILikeIt
I just want to be you, that was fabulous look forward to part 2 , *5* for this part thanks for writing.
Have to agree that this is a great story - but I kept jarring to a halt because your spelling is dreadful.
Please get a proofreader it you don't know how to spell.
Did I miss it or were you getting fucked by Mike omitted from the previous story?
Looking forward to the next installment.
I agree with your comment to me about the bi-sex scene. There are haters in here that no matter what you submit, they will drag out the ugly comments.
Continue to post and enjoy your work. That is all that matters.
Oh my goodness !! Probably the hottest story I’ve ever read on this site, and I’ve read thousands. Please stop using the word genitals. It is clinical & far from sexy. The same goes for penis. There are so many other names for both that while maybe crude, they are far sexier. Having said that, your writing is wonderfully sexy. I wish my wife was that bold and adventurous. Maybe it’s not too late.5-😊😊😊😊😊