All Comments on 'Wife Is Blackmailed Ch. 02'

by hotwife2k

Sort by:
  • 16 Comments
sidestreet1953sidestreet1953over 18 years ago
More

I like the theme and the way you appear to be heading and cant wait for the next instalment, please dont keep me in suspense too long!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The Perils of Pauline were never so good...

Dear hotwife2K...You are a real tease. You are a master at setting up excellent cliff hangers. Truly, the Perils of Pauline were never so titillating or erotic. Quickly, give us chapter 3 and tell us if the maintenance man is black or white. Is the creep in the car taking digital photos of his ex-girl friend. Don't take so long to post chapter 3! It is really "hard" waiting.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
A good start

Wow! Do we get a Chapter 3, also? Maybe the maintenance man is a niggah with a big ole long cock that he fucks her with, barebacked?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
An ambitious start

I find it remarkable that you have only 2 submissions to this promising serial. I wonder if you have posted here before under another author. In any event, your style teases and taunts very much like Jeff holds the upper hand over Mary. Her submissive streak and her willingness to do anything to protect her past sins from her husband leave me waiting for more. I hope you have several more installments in store and look for the first opportunity when you write of a different situation, with a different heroine. Keep up the fine effort!

Darkman

arienettearienetteabout 18 years ago
Very nice

I love where you're going with this and cannot wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Want more

When is chapter three of Wife Is Blackmailed coming out? First two chapters were great, but things are just heating up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
suspense is building

Chapter two is delightful, story is building nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
it getting stupid now,jumping off mountain now

first the teasing sucks.some writers get carried away.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Bullshit

More crap for you sick motherfuckers.

oldwinooldwinoover 17 years ago
Building Interest

Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.

Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.

oldwinooldwinoover 17 years ago
Building Interest

Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.

Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.

oldwinooldwinoover 17 years ago
Building Interest

Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.

Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.

oldwinooldwinoover 17 years ago
Building Interest

Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.

Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Outstanding

Great description. I can feel both of their emotions. You are a talented writer.

CindykayCindykayover 10 years ago
it got hotter

Your story is increasingly getting hotter!

jmcloverjmcloverover 9 years ago
slut made worse

even better

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous