by hotwife2k
I like the theme and the way you appear to be heading and cant wait for the next instalment, please dont keep me in suspense too long!
Dear hotwife2K...You are a real tease. You are a master at setting up excellent cliff hangers. Truly, the Perils of Pauline were never so titillating or erotic. Quickly, give us chapter 3 and tell us if the maintenance man is black or white. Is the creep in the car taking digital photos of his ex-girl friend. Don't take so long to post chapter 3! It is really "hard" waiting.
Wow! Do we get a Chapter 3, also? Maybe the maintenance man is a niggah with a big ole long cock that he fucks her with, barebacked?
I find it remarkable that you have only 2 submissions to this promising serial. I wonder if you have posted here before under another author. In any event, your style teases and taunts very much like Jeff holds the upper hand over Mary. Her submissive streak and her willingness to do anything to protect her past sins from her husband leave me waiting for more. I hope you have several more installments in store and look for the first opportunity when you write of a different situation, with a different heroine. Keep up the fine effort!
Darkman
I love where you're going with this and cannot wait to read more.
When is chapter three of Wife Is Blackmailed coming out? First two chapters were great, but things are just heating up.
first the teasing sucks.some writers get carried away.
Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.
Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.
Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.
Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.
Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.
Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.
Starting to get nasty, Nice writing but chapters too short.
Please keep more comming. Nastier and mor humiliating.
Great description. I can feel both of their emotions. You are a talented writer.