by stomp_stories
Hope you have more chapter to this wonderful story, so HOT!!!
5 Stars
Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo
"reluctant hotwife" - is my favorite sub-genre. This one is very, very HOT.
Yes - would love to hear more about these two...
fantastic story,one of the best read recently,what happens next,we need to be able to enjoy the loving and sexually in this writing,please follow up ,keep writing,thanks again,looking forward
Where's Tom, when does he dump the cheating, diseased slag and get revenge on the asshole and his daughter?
Nicely done, well paced and a delicious plotline. I am curious as to how Laura will explain Sean to her husband, as Sean becomes more prominent in her life. The pregnancy issue is well introduced and should be a significant hurdle that Laura will have to either accept or refuse to let happen.
Please keep posting new chapters.
BTW, your writing is improving by leaps and bounds!
More racist BS. Big black guy taking the white wife of a little weak white husband. White wife can’t say no and doesn’t mind getting knocked up by the black stud. Yeah, all black men are studs (not) and all white men are wimp cucks. There wasn’t one redeeming thing about this story.
Should have put a stop to Tanya.
Find a gun and test Sean military training,Tanya too.
Great story hopefully another chapter he’s had her 3 times and she hasn’t even tasted him yet and will she ever go back to her husband now she had black
Great story. Hopping there will be others parts like learning Laura to deepthroat or anal session
She probably has also never given a blow job. He should have her do this and also clean him with her mouth after sex.
Nothing short of RAPE, both him and his daughter should be in prison. Hopefully both being raped by their fellow inmates.
Great story, loved it especially the ending. Keep up the work and I hope to see the next chapter soon
Nice work. Many typos and wrong words. She's and he's getting mixed up. But a good story. Also vote for a part 2...and 3...and more. It is only Friday after all, and they have until Wednesday when her husband gets home. Assuming Sean doesn't just keep her.
On another note, Laura, Tom, Tonya, and Sean are the same names used in another, similar story of yours. But different details indicating different people. You might want to change characters' names from story to story. Gives you options for combining story lines later.
Bravo! This is one of the all time great stories on Literotica! - Oh, shit! I guess that means I'm turned on by r*pe! Fuck!! I didn't need this self knowledge!!
I love it when I read stories about white wives going black. I would like to see my wife going black.
I can just imagine my wife telling him to cum inside her and give her a baby. To hear her telling him that she loves his huge black cock and how he now owns her pussy forever.
This is your best story so far! It is the best as it has real preg risk sex in it. protected sex is mere mutual masturbation. Hot sex is where it is raw and there is a risk of impregnation like mother nature intended.
This story is so stimulating, so hot. I think when Sean seeds Laura and she initiates there first kiss the time must be around midnight or early morning. That makes it Saturday and the two of them have more time to explore their budding relationship. Which means a part 2 is needed at the very least.
Only read the first page. What a ridiculous story, so far fetched. At least make the circumstances in which the wife goes black believable. Are we supposed to believe that this women's best friend has assisted her father to basically rape her? Absolutely ridiculous.
Fabulous stuff... You are emerging as the top IR writer here!
Looking forward to more of all your stories... Hot as hell!
Do women really like having cum sprayed all over their faces? Maybe once out of interest with their eyes shut.
Not a pleasurable or erotic story for me.
to Paulo - yes I do love having warm gooey cum splattered all over my face - I especially love feeling the warmth on my cheeks
Paulo1000 Ohh yes some of them do indeed
And Men like me also love it , so don't that surprised
cynthia0920 And your right it can and is most time a very hot and sexy feeling
What a great story, I hope you continue there journey together and see how this develops, thank you for writing
I love the story and the writing was acceptable. But the change of Point of View is fundamentally wrong. If that would be adjusted, the story would be 5 stars.
5 stars plus. Hopefully, Laura falls in love with Sean and they make some cute black babies.
Najlepsza z najlepszych - nie mogę się doczekać momentu , kiedy Sean wychowa Laurę kilkukrotnie ta będzie wychowywała czarne dzieci Seana wraz ze swoim mężem podczas gdy Tom będzie ją zachęcał do dalszych ciąż spowodowanych przez Seana . Najlepszy z możliwych związków białej , młodej pięknej kobiety z o wiele starszym od niej czarnym ogierem , który rozmnaża ją wielokrotnie
Tak powinno być - każdy starszy , czarny jak kruk mężczyzna wyposażony w ogromnego , grubego chuja i zawsze pełne mocnego nasienia jądra , powinien mieć dostęp do każdej płodnej , młodej białej pipki o każdej porze i powinien siać swoje płodne , silne afrykańskie ziarno w pięknych pipkach pięknych , młodych kobiet a zwłaszcza mężatek , która razem ze swoim białym mężem będzie wychowywać jego czarne dzieci . Młode białe żony są do tego stworzone aby chodzić z ciążowym , czarnym brzuchem jak najczęściej i to od dorosłych , kilkanaście lat od nich starszych wielkich murzynów z potężnymi chujami .
Yea...way to over the top, even for fiction. Some nimrod is gonna say, this can really happen...no way in hell something this absolutely crazy and ridiculous could happen.
Like another sane commenter, I had to stop reading after 1 page. I understand people will say, don't read it then, etc...it sounded interesting so I started, then it went off the damn rails. Plus, you don't know until you read. I don't mind seduction, convincing, even a little reluctance/nonconsensual...but this? You might as well said she shits gold and has a vagina made of money, good grief.
This author has annissue with race a bit too. They are bordering race baiting with their stories.
Oof...
Outstanding story in BBC/White Wife genre... Nuances here are terrific including the erotic development the fetish inclusive of capitulation and domination... Part two flowed smoothly after "the kiss" as well...
This type scenario is more common these days than some seemingly on this comments thread might think...
Looking forward to Part Three sooner than later... Unlimited potential going forward given how well the story and characters are developed including Tonya's key role as both confidante and daughter proving her loyalty and hoping for love in return from her long lost dad..
Good job by the author...