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"Good!" I stated. "Now lay down in bed."
"Yes Master." She said subserviently.
"Close your eyes and relax. I'm going to bring you completely out of trance now. All of the commands and instructions I have given to you will remain with you from now on for the rest of your life. You will willingly and automatically respond to every command and instruction I have given to you while in hypnosis. Do you understand?"
"Yes Master." She said calmly.
"I'm going to count from one to five. When I get to five you will drift off to sleep and sleep so soundly and peacefully, better than you have in years. You will awaken tomorrow morning feeling absolutely amazing. You will remember that we had amazing sex. The rest will be a rather foggy memory that you just cant quite recall all of the details about. You will remember that you LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT and can't wait to do it all again. Do you understand?" I asked.
"Yes Master." She said again calmly.
"Very good then. One, feeling absolutely amazing; two, knowing you loved every minute of this experience; three, loving the idea of pleasing me in every way; four, beginning to drift off into a very peaceful sleep; and 5, good night my love. Sleep well."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoNor should we wish to do that to anyone else.
It is fools gold.
Like king Midas you can have anything you want but nothing will please because nothing she gives you will ever truly be her gift to you.
SAD
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI am a trained clinical hypnotist.
yo did very well with the wording. but it would take a year of sessions to get her that far.
remember it is almost impossible to get her to do any thing she would not normally do.
You only gave her permission to act on her desires.
other wise a good story
sashaalenaover 11 years agoWhat happened to the story and the life it projected? He said he adored his wife and now he totally changed her? She was the hottest thing in his life, he never wanted another and than that? If you want to head towards a master / slave relationship, go for it but go way slower! AND most importantly, keep her in the loop. Mind Control is all well and good, but this was something different, this was harmfull to her.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoHusband morphed into a jerk. Maybe this clears up later. Maybe he went a little power mad. But I really enjoyed it generally.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoif ur gonna hypnotize someone dont make so that u alter their personality, make it so that u can command then to do kinkier things or sex more often. kind of fucked up
Anonymousabout 12 years agoHe went from having a wife and partner to a mindless slave? He went from a husband to this joke of a man? What's next, is he going to hypnotize his kids so that they are mindless dolls, seen but not heard?
I don't know how the author thought this was erotic. Just because he's a retarded psychopath doesn't mean the rest of us want to watch his journey into asshattery.
garyblueabout 12 years agoYour protagonist went from being a nice guy looking for a little more zing in his love life to asshole. There is no believable pathway from chapter one to chapter two. A first time induction using the unconnected /commands/ just doesn't happen. You should have made baby steps, and if master/slave was to be the desired dénouement, the plot and the hypnotic instructions should build rather than pop up.
I suppose you could be setting us up for a different ending. Maybe she wakes in the morning, remembers a little too clearly what her husband did before she lays a two by four across his ribs, calls a divorce attorney, grabs the kids, and heads for her mom's house.
santalindabout 12 years agoThe story had a great Plot But the author lost it. It was so mechanical and not a bit of erotiicism was there. . Felt like reading an article.
