All Comments on 'Wife's New Vacation Lover'

I have 3 targets for a pool cue

Yes okay we get it you get off sharing your slutwife.

I wonder where these bars and pool halls are that allow sex in public?

A lot of mistakes. Dialogue not punctuated properly. It's an anal story that isn't in the anal category, although I note you've posted there before, so you do know where to find it. 2*

Nice story I enjoyed it just right amount of detail,little more of her thoughts would be nice

Author, you forgot the cuck tag in this story too.

Being the type to likely stomp someone putting a move on my wife, I'm not a fan of this genre. However, as a story, this is descriptive and decently written, except for a lack of any real dialogue, which leaves it flat and lifeless. Where there was dialogue, the use of dialogue quotations was woeful and missing. Good fiction requires dialogue for character development and for the reader to better feel the story. Literotica has a great 'Hot To' category with brief, excellent and easily understood guidance on dialogue. 3/5.

Quotation marks are NOT optional!

Very sexy story. Can't wait for the next one!

Whats wrong with a perfectly good pussy? or is he a gay guy?

I like stories to have a little believability and this story missed the mark. I like stories with a slow and sensual build up to anal but pushing it in and fucking with little or no lube is pure BS.

There's an anal section for a reason. But this belongs in the "Dumbshit" category.

@26thNC…you forgot the “asshole” tag on your bio.

Hot story and in some fashion probably played out more often than you think in drunk vacations . I myself way to jealous to even think about it but I’ve been around whore pig wives who are with or without hubby’s fucking at vacation spots. Remembering an engaged friends wife went to spring break with girlfriends as her bachelorette party also . Her friends were a pack of wild pigs out there , mostly out of character from back home in every day life. Turns out wedding never happened. She fucked a guy with the group that she didn’t know was friends. He fucked her two days then after a crazy drinking night his friend joined and they were doing her switching from ass to pussy to mouth . There were video and pics . He even got her one last time on the plane and told her now you can get married. He said on your wedding night I want you to remember how my dick felt up the ass and how my Cum taste going down your throat. The future hubby got pics and a video tape in the mail , no one had the heart to tell him . He at dinner a month later with her parents and two brothers announced the wedding was off and dropped pics to the family and told the a tape was also mailed if they wanted to watch . He said he was sorry but wanted them to know it wasn’t him who did this . How hard to see those pics

Anonymous, if you had a bio, you could include 26thNC’s bitch in it. But , of course, a cowardly piece of shit like you doesn’t have one.

Anonymous cunt, what's in your bio?

Fun story. It's unfortunate that trolls need to spit vile with their comments. Ignore them. I thought the dialog and action was well paced and erotic.

Not bad, but the lack of correct punctuation, surcharges as quote marks for dialogue threw me off. Work on getting out of 1st person, it’s too simple. Also, beef up your descriptive language.

I enjoyed this. I supposed because I know what it’s like to be in this position. My wife and I take vacations specifically to allow her to show off and maybe find a willing guy for her to get some strange dick. The best was when we rented a house on the beach in North Carolina and there were six guys renting the house next to ours. She got to fuck four of the six over a four day period. It was amazing.

Let's see: anonymous fucker, minimal lube, no protection -- why is this in LW?

awesome

Good story, personal fantasy of mine to have my wife suck my cock , While she is being vigorously sodomized by a stranger.