by Paul44
Mary Poppins, eh? Is that who you fancy? Surely you mean Mrs. Doubtfire, don't you?
Great story with an across-the-pond flavor. Way to go! Oh for the innocense of youth before the advent of porn mags, cable soft-porn, and the internet pic sites. Oh well, back to the DVD collection with you!
Fun plot, but they spoke like porno versions of Mary Poppins.
I liked the content a lot, but the lack of punctuation, especially in the dialogue, made it hard for me to really get into the story and imagine it.