All Comments on 'Wild Sex in a Noisy Indian Wedding'

The culture is as such so I am not surprise.

You are welcome to have such ideas about basic needs.

IF you're writing an "India" type story, you really gotta gotta have "India - type " vocabulary, and sorry, but............ "You mother fucker, why didn't you come early. I have been fingering since last night. I don't like fucking phone sex, you dog...ohhh...aahhh" just **does not** cut it. .........

Re-reading ( scanning, actually) your entire effort, why not just change the names a bit, and call it a noisy chinese wedding, or Japanese, or Turkish, or, or anything, because there was not one word that was India-specific.

What a waste, Your time, My time, and Electricity.

Kilroy.

This type of incident I have seen in Rajastan and pune in sadasiv peth.

It would be wonderful to know what you saw in Rajasthan and Pune,

Please share your experiences.

Thanks a lot for your lovely words of appreciation, interest and liking the story and its narrative style.

I have completed few more parts but have to do final editing.

Hope that you would continue to read my stories along with words of encouragement.

it is hot wedding story i ever read

Thanks Shivaa for reading and sharing your comment.

Hi Geeta,

Hope you liked the story, nice meeting you

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